m,y jutsu training

One day i walked outside of my house covered wiht leaves from the harsh winds last night and i stood up with my legs almost alsleep and wleked outside with my usual clothes on trying to keep my black wings a secret from who i am about to train with....as i approach the old man setting on a brightly painted bench next to his oddly colored house i say "how are you, and are you ready to train?" as i await fo the answer i sat down next to the bench he was setting down on, and then i ask another question "are you micono minaru by any chance?"

Micono:"yes i am micono minaru and yes i am ready to train, but first i must tell you about the jutsu."

Minaru:"ok, then well tell me and we shall begain training"

Micono:"ok, this speacial genjutsu was created by Kamira, anyway here is the detail... This unnamed Genjutsu is a technique used by Kamira. Kamira will cause the area around the target to be enveloped by darkness. Once inside the black space, the target will see grotesque figures said to be tortured criminals, the previous victims of the technique. These grotesqueries will reach out and grab a hold of the target. They will then be thrown into the void to the mercy of a spectral dragon. The horrifying oni can even extend from the targets own body to attack them. All aimed at transfixing the victim with fear and shock while Kamira herself chokes and kills the target. however you dont have to choke"

Minaru:"is this a safe jutsu to test and train with some one?"

Micono"yes it is fine it is just scary, i will warn you though you though...i only see it you dont see anything"

Minaru:"yes i know now lets begain"

Micono:"ok then, you try"

Minaru:"ok, first i make the proper hand signs to do such a jutsu, and then i will trap you. shshshshshshsh(handsgns) "

Micono: ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ...

Minaru: are you alright? i release the genjutsu

Micono: Yoiu are a true natural at genjutsu i know you specialise in them but i have never seen anyone get it down that quick...it truely is a scary lace in there

Minaru: thank you very uch for you assistance, i walked off knowing i was focussing my chakra the whole time he was talking.... ... .... ... ... .. .. ... .. i feel as if i didnt do it rihgt though and he was faking however i know him and i dont think he is.... ...

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